First draft finally done

Shortly after the turn of the new year, right around when I first heard of Tirion Fordring, central character in the eBook 'Of Blood and Honor', being in game, I began a short story. Still unnamed, that story has finally been finished, or at least the first draft. The book, which was the first work of literature released by Blizzard back in 2000, is written to occur around the time that Thrall was forming his new Horde, just before they ventured across the sea, and told the tale of a Paladin who did what was honorable, and lost his place in the Order of the Silver Hand and his title, over it.

My story tells of how my main character, the character I have always made when I first ventured to a server, Medros, and how he came to know of Tirion Fordring, both long before the Scourge arrived, and since. The story can be found in draft form here. Corrections in grammar are welcome, and if you notice some errors in wording or phrasing, they would also be welcome. Commentaries about the quality of the fiction, however, are not welcome. This is a story of my character, his back story I guess you could say, and thus is not created to be the best work of WoW fiction ever. It is created to form more of Medros' story, nothing more or less.

I may, depending on the reaction to this story, write another story surrounding Medros' trip to the Caverns of Time, where he sees many of those whom he has faced and heard of in the past, as well as meeting an earlier version of Lord Fordring. It will tell of his encounters, and his discussions with his companion at the time. Enjoy the story, and I hope to read your reactions and constructive criticisms of my creative work. Oh, and useful title ideas would be welcome, and useless ones won't be posted long.